Showing posts with label the Unfinished Song: Initiate. Show all posts
Showing posts with label the Unfinished Song: Initiate. Show all posts

Monday, April 28, 2014

Mythical Monday (47)


It seems there are many books based on or influenced by Myths and Mythological Beings.

There are so many different Mythology and Mythological Beings recorded. Some are very popular and well known, others not so much. There are many similar beings, yet different depending on the culture it’s based in.  The definition of Myth covers about anything in the Urban Fantasy/Fantasy realm to me.

I’ve invited authors to share briefly the Mythological being or Myth that influenced their character(s) or story, or what their character(s) are based on influencing their books.  Hosting here, one author and being or myth per week.


This week we have:
Fantasy author 
Tara Maya
Talking Pixies and Faeries in Neolithic Era.


Here’s a shameful secret: Back when I started my Unfinished Song fantasy, I wasn’t trying to be fresh, original or non-Western. In fact, I wanted to write a “classic” fantasy. I knew I wanted actual pixies and faeries in it. I wanted it to be both epic and a fairytale—an epic faerie tale. I knew I wanted the magic to be based on dancing and color, and that the ability to dance the whole rainbow would be almost extinct in their world. Other than that, I just planned to include all the tropes of the genre. The setting was cliché because I didn’t feel like investing the time in world-building for a mere “practice” story. My original heroine, Dindi, was a peasant girl; my original hero, Kavio, was a prince.

What knocked sense into me? I don’t know. A fairy whispered in my ear that I needed to change the setting. It needed to be set in a time I had never seen a fantasy set before: with Neolithic rather than medieval technology. The Neolithic Era was a particular time period in human history, but it also refers to a stage of civilization, and I use it in the later sense. Neolithic, or “new stone age” technology means that the people primarily use flint and obsidian tipped arrows and spears.

While I don’t know how this idea came to me, I do remember how it energized me. The whole story excited me again. The early time period worked for three reasons:

One, the main storyline was inspired by a Polynesian myth, so this was a tip of the hat to that non- European setting.

Two, it fit my fancy that the events of The Unfinished Song were the “original” and “primordial” events which are the secret roots of all our fairy tales.

Three, every culture around the world has gone through a stage of Neolithic level technology.

Every place on earth has immense, mysterious monuments made from dragging big stones around. This meant that I could easily mix and match my cultural inspiration. I could use Hopi agriculture, Celtic pig-farming and musical traditions, Zulu warfare, West African Initiation ceremonies, and so on. For the hero and heroine’s people, I drew strongly on Hopi and Zuni cultures.

As a history nerd (I do have my masters in the subject!), the excuse to research obscure and exotic Neolithic cultures ignited my enthusiasm for the story, and has kept me excited about the series ever since. The biggest problem with the standard fantasy pseudo-medieval-pseudo-European setting is not that it is medieval or that it is European or even that it has been done before. It is because the writer doesn’t take the time to study real history (or “real” mythology) as a model, but simply bases their own world on worlds in other fantasy books. The result has much the same problem as cloning a clone, or xeroxing a xerox. The quality fades the more derivative your product is. We shouldn’t shortchange ourselves by re-treading the same worn paths, but should be brave enough to follow history back along rarely explored by-ways for inspiration.



Tara’s Bio:
Tara Maya has lived in Africa, Europe and Asia. She's pounded sorghum with mortar and pestle in a little clay village where the jungle meets the desert, meditated in a Buddhist monastery in the Himalayas and sailed the Volga river to a secret city that was once the heart of the Soviet space program. This first-hand experience, as well as research into the strange and piquant histories of lost civilizations, inspires her writing. Her terrible housekeeping, however, is entirely the fault of pixies.

Find Tara:
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/TheUnfinishedSongEpicFantasy
Twitter: www.twitter.com/taramayastales
Website: www.bestfantasynovel.com
Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Tara-Maya/e/B004HAI038/

Purchase Tara's Unfinished Song series: (click the image)

Saturday, March 12, 2011

Book Review: The Unfinished Song: Initiate

The Unfinished Song: Initiate

By:  Tara Maya

Publisher:  Misque Press

Publish Date:  December 2010

Format:  Kindle

Genre:  Fantasy

Series:  1st book in the Unfinished Song series

Recommendation:  Maybe for a quick read with Fae and dance magic, if you enjoy dance.

Book Synopsis:
DEADLY INITIATION

A DETERMINED GIRL...
Dindi can't do anything right, maybe because she spends more time dancing with pixies than doing her chores.  Her clan hopes to marry her off and settle her down, but she dreams of becoming a Tavaedi, one of the powerful warrior-dancers whose secret magics are revealed only to those who pass a mysterious Test during the Initiation ceremony.  The problem?  No-one in Dindi's clan has ever passed the Test.  her grandmother died trying.  But Dindi has a plan.

AN EXILED WARRIOR...
Kavio is the most powerful warrior-dancer in Faearth, but when he is exiled from the tribehold for a crime he didn't commit, he decides to shed his old life.  If roving cannibals and hexers don't kill him first, this is his chance to escape the shadow of his father's wars and his mother's curse.  But when he rescues a young Initiate girl, he finds himself drawn into as deadly a plot as any he left behind.  He must decide whether to walk away or fight for her...assuming she would even accept the help of an exile.

First Sentence:
Dindi scanned the crowd, hoping to slip into the plaza unnoticed.

My Thoughts and Summary:
Dindi is of The Lost Swan clan, one of three human clans who defeated the high fae ~ the Aelfae.  Dindi is considered a little strange by her clan members.  Her chores are always mixed up, if they are completed, as she rather dance with the pixies than work and then they help her finish her chores which are done wrong.  Dindi loves to dance and when the Tavaedi Dancers are in town performing she is on her way to sneak in and watch.  Dindi has a plan, not only to enjoy the dances she sees but to memorize them as she wants to be a Tavaedi Dancer, and she's waiting for her initiation to come.  The only thing... none from her clan has ever passed the initiation to become a magical dancer of the Tavaedi.  On day while traveling on her initiate journey, the girls were teasing her and in the end she became in a dire situation.  A young exiled man who is taken by Dindi's aura earlier that day, saves her.  But he might be in more trouble than he expected or maybe he'll find a place he could be welcomed.

The world weaved here if full of fae in which many humans can not see them.  There are a few who can but people seem to look down upon that.  I enjoyed the idea of humans having magical colorful auras and magical abilities in which dancing is how it is brought to life and used.  I enjoyed the magical world when it started to iron out for me.

The story read as a young adult book.  With the young characters and innocents here among them.  And the fae playing with the young that can see them.  With this being the beginning of the book, I could suggest it to be a read that Young Adults could read as well.

I did have just a few small hang-ups.  As I enjoyed the second half of the book more than the first half, I realized I was caught up in trying to differentiate the clans and magical uses and the fae world.  And by the second half I seemed to understand the set up more.  The other part that distracted me slightly was at one point towards the end the view point changed.  We went from Dindi's view point being described as 'she' or 'Dindi' and her voice of talk to the view point of 'you'.  I'm sure with the part it was at was meant to enunciate the part, but caught me off guard at first.  Then it was switched back to normal view point afterward.

Other than these small things to me, I enjoyed the story idea.  I like the magic being in colors and viewed by those who have the abilities in them, and the dance being the way to draw the abilities to surface and work ~ almost reminds me of Native Americans dances or tribal dances.

After finishing the book I'm left with questions as to what will happen with the characters along with the puzzles that they know of.  A cliffhanging ending to have you jump into the next book, which should be out now.


I received this book from the author for an honest review.


This book qualifies for the Speculative Fiction Challenge hosted by Floor to Ceiling Books.